Villanelle (3)

Very substandard villanelle that I randomly made up. This is complete crap, but it IS still a villanelle.

When the sun goes up and the moon comes down
It would be a new day, a new beginning
As office workers dress in grey and brown

People would travel across town
To get to their workplace
When the sun goes up and the moon comes down

Because of this, some people might frown
Because they don’t wish to waste their time
As office workers dress in grey and brown

They decide to go downtown
Party through the night, till
The sun comes up and the moon comes down

But as they wander around
Aimlessly, they’d realize they remain
As office workers dress in grey and brown

For if not, they’d drown
In debt that’d been piling up
When the sun goes up and the moon comes down
As office workers dress in grey and brown